Review Detail of Ryuu23 in Akame Ga Kill -The Wish
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First of all, I want to say that I am very disappointed with this work. I will not criticize the plot as a whole. I don't like that either. MC wanted to become a killer, there was something wrong with him from the very beginning. The author gave the MC three wishes. And to be honest, I don't see the need for these desires. He could just be reborn or be an original character in this world. The second wish was basically wasted. The author may disagree with me, but nothing prevented the MC from wishing for a time period during the choice of the world or by the authors themselves to establish this moment. Speaking of choice, the MC chose the moment to kill the children. It's about what's wrong with him. His first desire is for talent. I have not seen this talent. They were all trained the same and he does not stand out from the others. The third wish ... which would allow him to become an OP ... was nerfed. MC again did not stand out in comparison with others, although he had to be several orders of magnitude stronger than them. This shit annoys me. I want to say that the author chose a dark world, MC is a murderer with no love interest, he follows the canon (characters die according to the canon ...), although for MC that girl was important, but he did not save her for a stupid reason that he did not remember canon, and finally what I hate the most is the MC's nerf. What is the point of giving him advantages in order to nullify them? This is too illogical and stupid. Watching MC barely defeat his opponents, as if he does not have any advantages and teigu, you want to vomit blood, so annoying. I'm pissed off by authors who can't build a story from the start, and instead of accepting input, I start writing some shit. I also don't like the quality of the writing at all. But one could still live with it, if not for the above. Oh, did I talk about the MC being hypocritical and killing people for no reason? My point is that he really didn't need to become the assassin and dog of the Empire. But he happily wags his tail and cuts people without any questions or thoughts. He just doesn't care. I would like to point out that prior to the reincarnation, this was an ordinary 21 year old student at the academy.
Akame Ga Kill -The Wish
Scrixxel
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This Akame ga kill work is going to be of the side of the Empire.. I thought it would be clearly after I wrote the Chapters unly now. That "Talent" That you speak of, is the Talent to kill without any hesitation do you think one of our world who lived a "Normal" Life would do it without hesitation? Really? I appreciate your comment because it really helped me.. But I thought many things would be clear and on the thing in Akame ga kill would what would happen when I make him OP? Ahh right, he would maybe in your sense of OPness being stronger than Esdeath.. I think it would be clear that the Fanfiction would be predictable as ****.. So I thank you for your comment, but yep its my first Fanfiction I acknowledge that there are many problems in it.. Example he was 21 in his old world means he is now 37 and still isn´t the brightest one of all of them..
He might not do it without hesitation for the first thirty times. In time He would get used to it. You are just nerfing him for the sake of nerfing him with no valid reason
Scrixxel:This Akame ga kill work is going to be of the side of the Empire.. I thought it would be clearly after I wrote the Chapters unly now. That "Talent" That you speak of, is the Talent to kill without any hesitation do you think one of our world who lived a "Normal" Life would do it without hesitation? Really? I appreciate your comment because it really helped me.. But I thought many things would be clear and on the thing in Akame ga kill would what would happen when I make him OP? Ahh right, he would maybe in your sense of OPness being stronger than Esdeath.. I think it would be clear that the Fanfiction would be predictable as ****.. So I thank you for your comment, but yep its my first Fanfiction I acknowledge that there are many problems in it.. Example he was 21 in his old world means he is now 37 and still isn´t the brightest one of all of them..
Scrixxel:This Akame ga kill work is going to be of the side of the Empire.. I thought it would be clearly after I wrote the Chapters unly now. That "Talent" That you speak of, is the Talent to kill without any hesitation do you think one of our world who lived a "Normal" Life would do it without hesitation? Really? I appreciate your comment because it really helped me.. But I thought many things would be clear and on the thing in Akame ga kill would what would happen when I make him OP? Ahh right, he would maybe in your sense of OPness being stronger than Esdeath.. I think it would be clear that the Fanfiction would be predictable as ****.. So I thank you for your comment, but yep its my first Fanfiction I acknowledge that there are many problems in it.. Example he was 21 in his old world means he is now 37 and still isn´t the brightest one of all of them..
i live a normal life and i can kill without hesitation 3 wishes... the first it will be for my intelligence(Lelouch or something like that.... but i will change some things the second wish a bloodline, preferably a dragon bloodline the third wish will be the skill (create Skills), or if i will not have my memories i will take my memories and change the second wish....
Scrixxel:This Akame ga kill work is going to be of the side of the Empire.. I thought it would be clearly after I wrote the Chapters unly now. That "Talent" That you speak of, is the Talent to kill without any hesitation do you think one of our world who lived a "Normal" Life would do it without hesitation? Really? I appreciate your comment because it really helped me.. But I thought many things would be clear and on the thing in Akame ga kill would what would happen when I make him OP? Ahh right, he would maybe in your sense of OPness being stronger than Esdeath.. I think it would be clear that the Fanfiction would be predictable as ****.. So I thank you for your comment, but yep its my first Fanfiction I acknowledge that there are many problems in it.. Example he was 21 in his old world means he is now 37 and still isn´t the brightest one of all of them..
Not a bad choice with the Wishes but.. Remember its the Akame ga kill world.. A Dragon bloodline? Really? He wouldn´t really need to train to get the strongest.. And the Intelligence of Lelouch? He would literally destroy EVERYTHING.. It would be alright.. For lets say Naruto you could nerf the Bloodline a bit with the intelligence you could really get much and it would be really exciting to read something like that but in Akame ga kill where the Strongest is like a elite jonin to kage lvl in Naruto? I think it wouldn´t suit. Clearly, I thought something like Gamer´s mind.. But I though that would already be way too OP.. Maybe I think that the Akame ga kill world is a bit too weak.. But im not perfect *_*
If you don't want an op mc why do you even give him wishes. Should have used something like gacha to decide his powers then it would be alright. If you give him three wishes and he chooses rubbish it just proves mc is dumb as **** and probably make people drop it in the first few chapters.
Scrixxel:Not a bad choice with the Wishes but.. Remember its the Akame ga kill world.. A Dragon bloodline? Really? He wouldn´t really need to train to get the strongest.. And the Intelligence of Lelouch? He would literally destroy EVERYTHING.. It would be alright.. For lets say Naruto you could nerf the Bloodline a bit with the intelligence you could really get much and it would be really exciting to read something like that but in Akame ga kill where the Strongest is like a elite jonin to kage lvl in Naruto? I think it wouldn´t suit. Clearly, I thought something like Gamer´s mind.. But I though that would already be way too OP.. Maybe I think that the Akame ga kill world is a bit too weak.. But im not perfect *_*
there are dragons in this World so it would be possible to do smth like that. God stated that he can't wish for things outside of the World he wants to go and that isn't smth of of the World per se . ;)
Scrixxel:Not a bad choice with the Wishes but.. Remember its the Akame ga kill world.. A Dragon bloodline? Really? He wouldn´t really need to train to get the strongest.. And the Intelligence of Lelouch? He would literally destroy EVERYTHING.. It would be alright.. For lets say Naruto you could nerf the Bloodline a bit with the intelligence you could really get much and it would be really exciting to read something like that but in Akame ga kill where the Strongest is like a elite jonin to kage lvl in Naruto? I think it wouldn´t suit. Clearly, I thought something like Gamer´s mind.. But I though that would already be way too OP.. Maybe I think that the Akame ga kill world is a bit too weak.. But im not perfect *_*
actually , there are people with danger beast blood in them , like the leader of the path of peace , the one who can predict the future also , another woman from a sequel of the manga , she can create fire because she has danger beast bloodline from one of her parents it's not really unheard of ...
Scrixxel:Not a bad choice with the Wishes but.. Remember its the Akame ga kill world.. A Dragon bloodline? Really? He wouldn´t really need to train to get the strongest.. And the Intelligence of Lelouch? He would literally destroy EVERYTHING.. It would be alright.. For lets say Naruto you could nerf the Bloodline a bit with the intelligence you could really get much and it would be really exciting to read something like that but in Akame ga kill where the Strongest is like a elite jonin to kage lvl in Naruto? I think it wouldn´t suit. Clearly, I thought something like Gamer´s mind.. But I though that would already be way too OP.. Maybe I think that the Akame ga kill world is a bit too weak.. But im not perfect *_*