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I am not going to suger coat things, this story was not that good at the starting. But it gets better as the story progresses. If you want overpowered main character with a gundam PP. Look elsewhere. MC will make mistakes and deal with the consiquences, have limitations that he has to overcome. And this is a very slow paced story. So, you won't find any plot holes. Max who is the Main Character will be a Hero. Anti-Hero sometimes, but don't expect him to be far right a vilian. And this story has some grammatical issues. Not gonna lie writing is hard. And English isn't my first language. So if you find any errors point them out. I will fix the ASAP. And the main story will evolve around a few key Characters. Max, Shuri, Spiderman and the love interest will be the main cast. Max won't just jump around from hero to hero and gain their powers. Symbiotes doesn't work that way. But I can guarantee you he will be above Thor and Hulk when he deals with Thanos. But it will take time. If you are a Marvel Guru, good for you and point out my mistakes. But do it politely in a civilized manner. I don't owe any one anything. If you like my story, you can suggest it on the comments or discord. I will get back soon. But if you hate how I have written my story you are welcomed to criticize. It's my work nothing too much. But I am satisfied with it, I have seen far better stories and Fanfics. So nothing to be proud about.