Sup, the author here. This is my One Piece story. The MC will be a little different from the usual MC's that I write, but at the same time it will have the same type of feeling. Anyway, hope ya like it... P.S: I forgot to write a review on my own story... someone did it before me and that is when I remembered.🤣

patron here, the first couple of chapter are not that good cause he wrote it months ago but its better than a lot of fics here so don't drop it straight away

For better or worse, it is a completed story. Gonna point out some things so people don't start this only to quickly drop again: - The writing quality is very mediocre. Some grammar errors and the story telling/writing style are meh. Not for people expecting hq stuff, but then again you wouldn't look for fanfictions here if that was the case. - The story development is extremely boring, to the point where I ask myself why I even stuck around past those initial chapters. More beneath. - The character design is also rather boring, with a dearth of good development. - The world background does not make much sense when contrasted with the canon of One Piece. If you could simply get the devilfruit of someone dying by putting a couple of fruits at his side, then the world government would have no need to keep pirates inprisoned in the eternal hell in impel down, and could have long since gathered all strong fruits... Plenty other such plotholes Over-all I would say it is a less than mediocre fanficion. Unfortunately we get told several times more than we get shown in this fanfiction. Most obvious in the case where the author feels he has to basically summarize the chapter and tell us what is 'shown' in it at the end of every chapter. The chapters at times also feel very short and have a bad proportion of chapter to advertisement and other stuff the author puts inside every chapter. Continue reading if you don't mind slight spoilers, even if they become quite clear early on: SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER Basically, our MC gets reincarnated into One Piece as a Fishman some years before the Great Age of pirates. Wefollow him on his journey where he aims to grow stronger and later overthrow the world government to take its place without reasonable motivation. It has more of watching a robot do a task it doesn't have a reason to do apart from its master (the author) telling it to do it. Pretty quickly it turns into making Jaw (the MC) the new 'Big Mom' by fathering many children and thus taking the world over with them. A flat 2 stars for the story, but it actually got completed so now it is 2.8. Sorry @HolyJoker but you could use quite some work on pretty much everything that concerns writing a story. Just my opinion tho, I am sure there are plenty who loved it. There were some good parts but given the huuuge slowdown in releases towards the end and the overwhelming amount of not so good parts I can't really remember them.

An entertaining story to read. Fight scenes are good,OC's are enjoyable to read. I just think the main character get Op too fast maybe? It hasn't felt like he struggled a lot and the story lacks a bit of twists and drama. It's a bit like a wish fulfilment. And i hoped the mc would be involved with some of the side stories among the one piece world.I mean one piece has a huge worldbuilding and there are many many plotlines. The main character isn't a beta though and there are interactions with other yonkous and a little with world goverment. There are many fights and they are fairly well done in my opinion. Author's powerscaling of the one piece characters are logical. The biggest plusses for me: 1- It does not follow the canon so you wont have to reread the already done stuff.2-Main character is not a moron. Overall:A little flat and lack twists but still entertaining enough.

read the first chapter and ...... I'm speechless, so much potential , and lots of hot mermaids in your area . not to forget the fact that the author has already proven himself capable of creating a masterpiece . so i have high expectations 🙌🏽🙌🏽😁😁🔥🔥

joker, this is the 3rd novel I've read where you treat women like garbage. especially naruto and that is unbelievably hostile. I'm leaving naruto and this unfinished. I hope the 5th novel I've read of your novels passes thinking that women are garbage. I don't want to believe that you are such a disgraceful person. I think the 5th novel will make that clear.

5/5 I like your fanfics, dear joker. I really do. Now, I must say some things: Jaw's character is something that I at first found a little interesting and different from other characters you wrote before, but it grew on me, it did. Ps: Tags SelFISH protagonist.

The fact that the author is holyjoker and this is a fanfic with a Fishman of makes it deserve a 5 star rating .

This author sure knows how to use the same character but in different settings. I am uninterested in your sociopaths, but as it can be seen, there are a lot of lobotomized people that sure do.