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Uzochukwu_John
Uzochukwu_JohnLv14yr
2020-12-07 18:17

this book is noice, but there is no major romantic conflict between the three main characters, a love triangle to clarify,[img=update] romantic conflict

Spirit Orbs : Chronicles of Ra'as

R_F_T_S
4.5
252 Chs

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R_F_T_S
R_F_T_SAuthor

I never planned on a love triangle in the first place, sorry bout that 😅

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Alexander_Ayala
Alexander_AyalaLv10

haha

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The_Procrastinator
The_ProcrastinatorLv4

Reveal spoiler

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notsosure
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The character build up is awesome. The characters are very realistic and I like the pace of the book. I'm looking forward to more chapters.👍👍👍👍

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John_Uzochukwu
John_UzochukwuLv1

Overall I'll say it's a really good book, top notch characters, uhhhhh, not so shabby character design, and piece of the art world building,dan howbeit quite similar to most protagonist is one of the few main characters that actually seeks vengeance but doesn't let go of basic morality, illara isn't a pushover and actually stands out unlike most female leads, and sai isn't the dumn jock boyfriend, all in all I think it's a great story.👍👍

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Jimpaly
JimpalyLv2

First of all, I’m going to point out that this story is around 70% action and 30% mystery. If you’re looking for action-packed scenes and descriptive fights, then this story’s for you. Other than that, I love the world-building you did in the beginning and as the story continues. The plot is eventful and interesting, but it feels like a lot of the mystery is already spoiled since it tells you who the bad guy is (but idk there might be more to the story that hadn’t been revealed yet). The supernatural abilities are placed well in the combat, though it might be nice to see them used outside of fights. The characters have nice interactions and there is a strong female lead, but you could give them clearer and more distinct personalities. The major issue is probably that you should work on your punctuation, sentencing, and paragraphing. Your word choice is great but there’s a lot you can improve. But overall, I love where the story’s going and I can’t wait for more!

4yr
AimbotNinja
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AJPaturde
AJPaturdeLv4

I liked this book, cool setting, and storyline. I have reviewed this book I hope the author comes and does it to mine also, lol kidding.

4yr
Zanyyy
ZanyyyLv11

I haven't really gotten far in reading this book but from what I've read I can tell that the author put a lot of work on the characters. The action is really too notch and I can't wait to read more!💯

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GeorgeOfTheCity
GeorgeOfTheCityLv2

Would love to read more. Good work with developing the characters. If you're new here and love books with a lot of action, this is the book for you.

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wild_imaginatorII
wild_imaginatorIILv2

I ****en love the starting line of your book! Nice writing style, Unique story line, Not clichè, What more could I want in a book? This is a recommended read!!!!!!!

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