Item: Spirit Orbs : Chronicles of Ra'as
Rating: 5
Author: Alanala

AlanalaLv24yr

2020-11-09 14:50

The Prologue was a lil' bit of an info dump, but it's alright, probably. Grammar can improve, I already saw the author's comment on it- I won't fault :pensive: Otherwise, the story is so far- heating up, great setting, ez collection

Spirit Orbs : Chronicles of Ra'as

R_F_T_S

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R_F_T_SAuthor

Oh, sorry bout the info dump 😅 I didn't mean for it to be that way, I just needed to set the bedrock for which the story be built on 😅

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