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Jozan
JozanLv24yr
2021-03-15 12:41

OMG! 😭😭😭 THIS AMAZING! The crime fighting romantic duo, dead parents avenger metal dude, corrupt politicians and police force, nice power scaling and PERFECT transitions of scene as well as the EUPHORIC description of (fight and flirt) scenes. My two fav scenes were the fight club battle (SO GOOD! 😭🙌) and the when llara teased lover boy into making him go back on his promise about no *** (I started blushing) Llara is best girl without a doubt!!🙄💅🥵💕 Author-sama congrats on 100k viewers keep up the AMAZINGLY GREAT work (I'm on chap 13 btw🤪 I'm loving so much) To anyone who is reading this review.... PLEASE!! Give this a read or at least at it to collections. 🙏🙏🙏 If it helps. you can use this app's audio feature to listen to the story while you do something else and still enjoy how great this novel is 😃👍🥰🥰🤩

Spirit Orbs : Chronicles of Ra'as

R_F_T_S
4.5
252 Chs

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R_F_T_S
R_F_T_SAuthor

Thanks for the uplifting review, I really appreciate it I'm glad you enjoy the work Don't worry, I haven't forgotten about ur work. 😅

4yr
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Jozan
JozanLv2

Please know that I mean everything I said 😊👍 it truly is great and I hope to one day reach these standards in my own work through my own hard working way 🥰

R_F_T_S:Thanks for the uplifting review, I really appreciate it I'm glad you enjoy the work Don't worry, I haven't forgotten about ur work. 😅
4yr
2
R_F_T_S
R_F_T_SAuthor

I appreciate your kind words, Arigatou 😅

Jozan:Please know that I mean everything I said 😊👍 it truly is great and I hope to one day reach these standards in my own work through my own hard working way 🥰
4yr
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Uzochukwu_John
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The character build up is awesome. The characters are very realistic and I like the pace of the book. I'm looking forward to more chapters.👍👍👍👍

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Overall I'll say it's a really good book, top notch characters, uhhhhh, not so shabby character design, and piece of the art world building,dan howbeit quite similar to most protagonist is one of the few main characters that actually seeks vengeance but doesn't let go of basic morality, illara isn't a pushover and actually stands out unlike most female leads, and sai isn't the dumn jock boyfriend, all in all I think it's a great story.👍👍

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Jimpaly
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First of all, I’m going to point out that this story is around 70% action and 30% mystery. If you’re looking for action-packed scenes and descriptive fights, then this story’s for you. Other than that, I love the world-building you did in the beginning and as the story continues. The plot is eventful and interesting, but it feels like a lot of the mystery is already spoiled since it tells you who the bad guy is (but idk there might be more to the story that hadn’t been revealed yet). The supernatural abilities are placed well in the combat, though it might be nice to see them used outside of fights. The characters have nice interactions and there is a strong female lead, but you could give them clearer and more distinct personalities. The major issue is probably that you should work on your punctuation, sentencing, and paragraphing. Your word choice is great but there’s a lot you can improve. But overall, I love where the story’s going and I can’t wait for more!

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I liked this book, cool setting, and storyline. I have reviewed this book I hope the author comes and does it to mine also, lol kidding.

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Zanyyy
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I haven't really gotten far in reading this book but from what I've read I can tell that the author put a lot of work on the characters. The action is really too notch and I can't wait to read more!💯

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Would love to read more. Good work with developing the characters. If you're new here and love books with a lot of action, this is the book for you.

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I ****en love the starting line of your book! Nice writing style, Unique story line, Not clichè, What more could I want in a book? This is a recommended read!!!!!!!

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