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Diamond_Air
Diamond_AirLv103yr
2020-12-17 23:09

Naisu! Naisu! Naisu! I'd say these three words only buh this is a review sooo I wuv this novel! Everything's great! Characters, plot and all. Heck, those fight scenes keep me tied to it. 👀 Who knows, I may borrow your writing style. Welll, novel's great and I'm sticking with it! Keep up the good work author XD

Spirit Orbs : Chronicles of Ra'as

R_F_T_S
4.5
252 Chs

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R_F_T_S
R_F_T_SAuthor

Thanks for the review 😅 but quick question; what does Naisu mean 😂😂

3yr
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R_F_T_S
R_F_T_SAuthor

Yeah you can borrow it if you feel it's absolutely required. I have no problems regarding that😊

3yr
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Diamond_Air
Diamond_AirLv10

Pfft, I might end up putting up a whole block of text trying to gind an explanation to it buh you could translate it as "Nice"😅😅

3yr
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