Review Detail of ClassyGay in Shades of the New World
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This is only my second time giving a review so I don't know much in this part. I'd say this is a really nice novel, not the best but one of the best in this website. Writing quality: I gave it a 4 star since there are some grammatical errors or typos but overall, the quality is still good. The way you describe things is really good. So good that I can see the things you describe clearly. Oh and the errors and typos aren't really a problem but still hope you'd update it later on if you have time. Story development: It's a really slow paced story but it's not boring at all. Tbh, I like it this way. Character design: This one! I really love the characters. They're realistic, they're rounded characters, they make complicated thoughts that further proves that they have actual brains and not just a straight fucking line in their skulls. They're relatable as ****. Erm this is just a personal request of mine so you don't really have to think about it but I hope you make a gay main side character lol. It's because in most fantasy novels in this website when the MC is straight everyone in the fucking novel is straight. But when it's BL story everyone in the story's fucking gay which is kinda... Eh! Even the fucking cats are gay!! And MC in you're story seems really open minded so I hope he gets a handsome, thirsty, sassy, reliable, and a bitch friend. He's sassy in front of his friends but when in front of the person he's interested he's reliable lol. Anyway this is just my personal wish so don't mind me but it's Christmas so I hope you'll give me my wish dear authorđ . Updating stability: Well I have nothing to say in this part as the updates are stable with 7 chaps a week but if possible I hope you do mass release every now and then. World background: 5 star! Don't ask why, just 5 star! Joke, well... the author really made a really well thought out world. The history, social hierarchy and stuff.
Shades of the New World
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Such a detailed review! Im glad u liked the characters and the world. Truly whenever i try to add a new chara i have to think about their quirks and personalities and everything about them so they don't feel boring. Which is why there are so few characters in general. As fir the gay characters, I've had ine in my head for a long time, but i just don't know when he would appear. Prob in the academy arc in the West. As for being sassy, I can def promise sassy characters, though im not sure if the gay chara will be sassy.
I don't really think my review is that detailed as my English vocabulary is kinda limiting my thoughts. But at least I was able to relay the gist of it lol. Thank goodness you're thinking of making a gay character! He doesn't have to be sassy but I hope he's not some sort of ermmm... boring, all smiles, deal with it sort of person. All the bent people I know are somewhat devil incarnates so those things that I just described, I just don't think they're realistic or relatable. This is just a personal view of mine about these if you think differently then it's fine.
NakedApron:Such a detailed review! Im glad u liked the characters and the world. Truly whenever i try to add a new chara i have to think about their quirks and personalities and everything about them so they don't feel boring. Which is why there are so few characters in general. As fir the gay characters, I've had ine in my head for a long time, but i just don't know when he would appear. Prob in the academy arc in the West. As for being sassy, I can def promise sassy characters, though im not sure if the gay chara will be sassy.