NakedApron
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NakedApron2yrCommentedCh 2 Chapter 1: No Means Yes- NakedApron2yrCommented
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"You have more power at your disposal, but your technique is pitiful," I yelled over the sounds of my burning pants. - NakedApron2yrCommented
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Her mouth was cool and wet, sucking and giving. She knew how to bob her head and avoid biting. My spirit sense identified her as a pure wind spirit around high class. She was just what I needed to further my cultivation, but I decided to let her have her fun for now. The wind spirit looked up at me with mischievous eyes. She leaned forward, and I felt her tight wind tunnel of a throat suck me down. - NakedApron2yrPosted
Writing quality: no problems I could find Story: it's fast, its easy to understand, and its so far interesting. also, the queen somehow feels like Anakin from the prequel, but tahts just prob me. character: I've only read till ch 5 so I can't really say, but so far the tropes are there with confined princess, prince with ill image, angry stepmom, and love triangle incoming.. What will happen to those tropes, we will surely find out. World background: Kingdoms and courts. summary: 5star
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I love how she talks while mixing informal and formal
This paragraph has been deleted. - NakedApron2yrReplied to KylarDrake
Thank you for the many gifts \(. _. \)
She was hiding all these things because against all odds, her heart decided that she was better off offending the king, rather than betraying Evin. - NakedApron2yrReplied to InfinitiaCh 117 To overcome things
- NakedApron2yrReplied to InfinitiaCh 28 Magic = Miracle
- NakedApron2yrReplied to Just_CheckingCh 212 Conclusion
- NakedApron2yrReplied to Sylver_pseudonymCh 212 Conclusion
- NakedApron2yrReplied to BorderlineAnorexicCh 140 Fight with the guards (1)
- NakedApron2yrReplied to Just_CheckingCh 193 World of Souls
- NakedApron2yrReplied to AlukadanceCh 192 Conversation pt.2
- NakedApron2yrReplied to lordastreaCh 1 Prologue: The Wanderer Beyond
- NakedApron2yrReplied to KylarDrakeCh 186 Light at the end of the tunnel
- NakedApron2yrReplied to Sylver_pseudonym
father of juicing
"By that logic, I'm sure there is something akin to mana in your world," Kena said. "But since no human there can use it, I assume it all simply goes to the Ruler of Earth and his direct subjects? If they could keep all that power to themselves, then it's small wonder no one dares to mess with them. Despite being small, our World creates an enormous of amount of mana, you know? I can't imagine what a world of Earth's size produces." - NakedApron2yrReplied to Laztrites
Never. ..
"Well, if there's nothing else to say, I'd better get home," Evin said, trying to keep his voice from straining.