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Review Detail of kakigori in Shades of the New World

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hey hey hey. here's your review. i didn't read through all ninety-nine chapters, but I'll give you my first impressions. Chapter 1 - talk about a cold open. The first line alone practically establishes the entire setting by itself, and it immediately paints a picture of a devastated wasteland. The interactions we see in the following paragraphs all set the mood really well. Everyone is weary and tired of war, and at this point, death doesn't register anymore. They become statistics, that sorta thing. The MC's shell-shock is evident. We didn't even need him to mention that he was already insane. It's just that obvious, so nice job for making it as such. Him lashing out at the Ascendant is something that would fit, given how what he's been through. So, in conclusion - great job characterising the MC, and an even better job establishing the setting. Even though said setting is only around for one chapter and then the isekai kicks in, it was still really well done and I would've liked to see a ****y bit more about of the old world. That being said, it's a personal preference thing. Great job.

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