The story was well thoughts, concept of strength and power are well done but I feel like every chapter is a rush, Too many things are happening at once while the plot armor of him having knowledge of strength that arent accessible to others is just pure fantasy since even if he is ahead in terms of knowledge every introduction of new way of gaining power should be a butterfly effect. Can you Imagine 5-10 People with iphones and the rest of the world without them? Delusional, Something Has to Happen, And in no way its Good to either sudes. This feels oddly one sided, extremely so if I may, I also see bo suspense what so ever in the story, I read to chapter 60+ and I dont like I am enjoying it anymore, Since I already know how things will progress, just repeat the prev 60 chapters And paraphrase, Flush, rinse and repeat.
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