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There is no such thing as “Perfection”.

2020-09-17 JoinedUnited Kingdom
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  • BlondStrawberry
    BlondStrawberry17d
    Replied to BlondStrawberry

    Chapter 60+

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    Tales of The Mighty Dragonair
    Fantasy · ranmaro
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  • BlondStrawberry
    BlondStrawberry17d
    Replied to Steve1987

    I Figured out it would be the case from chapter already dropped

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    Tales of The Mighty Dragonair
    Fantasy · ranmaro
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  • BlondStrawberry
    BlondStrawberry17d
    Posted

    The story was well thoughts, concept of strength and power are well done but I feel like every chapter is a rush, Too many things are happening at once while the plot armor of him having knowledge of strength that arent accessible to others is just pure fantasy since even if he is ahead in terms of knowledge every introduction of new way of gaining power should be a butterfly effect. Can you Imagine 5-10 People with iphones and the rest of the world without them? Delusional, Something Has to Happen, And in no way its Good to either sudes. This feels oddly one sided, extremely so if I may, I also see bo suspense what so ever in the story, I read to chapter 60+ and I dont like I am enjoying it anymore, Since I already know how things will progress, just repeat the prev 60 chapters And paraphrase, Flush, rinse and repeat.

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    Tales of The Mighty Dragonair
    Fantasy · ranmaro
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  • BlondStrawberry
    BlondStrawberry2mth
    Posted

    Grammar is Flawless but otherwise this story feels like some 12 year olds wet dream. most of whats going on makes absolute no logic, MC goIng left and rIght thinking with his pants while othEr characters thinks its fine. aristocratic woman offering her self like a blow doll. This is absolutely freaking horrid.

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    I Can Transform Into a Zombie
    Sci-fi · The Red World
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  • BlondStrawberry
    BlondStrawberry2mth
    Commented

    This is so akward to read man. “My bob” Is just So gayish and delusional sounding.

    Ch 34 Chapter 34 – [Day 11] – “Chief”
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    Sanguine Paradise
    Fantasy · Konge
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  • BlondStrawberry
    BlondStrawberry4mth
    Replied to Get_Diabetes

    Mhm honestly I didn’t want to reply at all but might as well explain my thoughts. Firstly, I didn’t like the gang or the subordinate Add-In to begin with, but you did both. You could have freely added the subordinate system but just don’t add in filler characters into the main story, this chapter showcased me that anytime you feel like it you will just add more useless characters into OP-ness when you are our of ideas. Also, why would the MC move at all after this? Just order his goons and its over, might as well flush the entire story draft down the toilet since I can’t imagine anything interesting anymore. You could have still made the MC walk away and choose better people with better personalities or diversity heck even different talents or maids man but not randoms and the story would be still enjoyable. The sect also never really played much importance in the story as well besides creating conversations and words for the chapters. He culd have camped the forest and permanently hunt and progress to higher hunting grounds instead of wasting time in the sect getting a meager amount of resources. My personaI opinion aside, I have so much more to say but this is your story and I am not entilted to shit on it since its your hardwork. Plus I didn’t think deeply into it I just didnt like what I was reading so far and the subordinate/gang was the fuse.

    Ch 39 Subordinate System
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    Godly Talent System
    Fantasy · Get_Diabetes
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  • BlondStrawberry
    BlondStrawberry4mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 1 Ruins Exploration Gone Wrong!
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    Supremacy Games
    Sci-fi · MidGard
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  • BlondStrawberry
    BlondStrawberry4mth
    Posted

    Extremely dissappointed by the flow of the story, feels like whatever comes goes and there is no real goals laid out feels like the MC is living every day as it is. there is also no proper planning or thoughts being down I stopped at chapter 49 where he traded mana Crystals for half price for a good relation like the city lord even knew he had mana crystals Which forced him to trade But he didnt know! such a piss off how the story progresses the more I read.

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    Evolution: A Warlock's Rise To Power
    Video Games · Dao_Of_Fiction
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  • BlondStrawberry
    BlondStrawberry4mth
    Commented

    Not really first, just that No one bothere to comment when They have juicy chapters In front of them

    Ch 165 Going Viral in The Mariana Empire!
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    Supremacy Games
    Sci-fi · MidGard
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  • BlondStrawberry
    BlondStrawberry4mth
    Commented

    🧐

    Ch 157 The 4th Passive Ability!
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    Sci-fi · MidGard
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  • BlondStrawberry
    BlondStrawberry5mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 1 A Sorrowful End
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    Digitize: Rebirth of the Silver Death God
    Video Games · ShadowsFinger
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  • BlondStrawberry
    BlondStrawberry6mth
    Posted

    Sorry but no matter what and how you review the novel as something really likeable, all it takes me is just one look at the “Chapter gallery” for me to actually feel ill. Pass

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    Grandson of the Holy Emperor is a Necromancer
    Magical Realism · Shadow-kun
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