Wow! It’s finally over!  For almost a year and five months I kept writing in this novel. It seems like a long time but I can feel like I started it yesterday! Thanks to everyone who ever read my novel. Thanks to anyone who wrote any comment, review, and even debated over my novel. And SPECIAL THANKS for anyone who read through all the entire novel and reached this point. Thanks, without your support all this time, I don’t know how I would have accomplished this feat. I faced a lot of hardships thanks to repeated covid attacks, but thanks to readers like you, I managed to survive. So thank you and I hope you like my novel. If you want, feel free to leave a review of what you think about the novel. I’d love to hear all your thoughts about my baby. As for my future projects, there will be two novels branching from this one. The first will be a continuation of Arthur’s journey in the ultimate realm waiting for him. I’ll publish this novel here, continuing after this chapter and will be marked all with Tales 2. As for the second novel, it will be a separate one. It will follow a new tale which will happen ten thousand years after the reform of the universe into the new three realms.  This new novel will go by the name: Tales Of The Three Realms. Wait for it, I hope I can publish it in one month's time. So, this is it! I hope you enjoyed the journey so far. And now I deserve a little rest. I’ll resume Arthur’s adventure after taking one week to ten days break.  I hope you all stay safe and have a good time.  Ranmaro

This is the updated review about my novel so far, trying to reply to some questions and doubts I noticed recently about the novel. I will start the review by quoting the words of a renown worldwide editor that I personally respect, Daniel Wallace "Some of us writers, as a result, get confused about our goal. We try to write a novel that introduces readers to that universe that has begun shimmering in our mind's eye. But unless you plan to write a thousand page "epic," and you know how to make such a grand tome exciting to a reader, what happens instead is: You get confused and stuck because there is so much to convey. Your characters feel passive, like TOURISTS, because their real function in the narrative is to show up to new parts of this fictional world so that you can describe those locations to the reader. ​In contrast, it can be very therapeutic, and very effective, to instead distinguish between the novel's "universe" and its "story." And then to focus on the story. The novel's story might reveal only a tiny fraction of that fictional universe. Instead, the story focuses on a character trying to do something, to change, to figure something out. Through that fictional person's struggles, we let the reader imagine the fullness of the fictional universe we see." My novel is well planned, per my usual writing habits in writing any story. It's grand outline, main plots and subplots are already planned out. So, a thing or two might happen that would seem illogical, or things being mentioned now and not be spoken about for long time; these all are intentional, not plot holes, but it's the plot twists. The MC works not as a tourist, but a real adventurer, where he will focus on making himself stronger, recruit many followers, build an army, and make this army mighty. He seeks to change his current situation to better, and he won't stop at anything while doing that. He might seem kind at first, but if you read carefully, noticed the tiny points I scattered here and there, you will discover he never did anything to anyone outside the small area of his own personal benefit. He never went off to rescue anyone, or make a war for a girl; everything he did and will do will only be for his own benefit. As for the first chapters, you might think they are slow in progressing, but many, and I mean it, many plot pieces are scattered there, unseen yet to you, but everywhere you will find many secrets hidden well, and if you dig well and deep enough you will be able to spot it. Long review short, this isn't a story written on a whim, not a story written with conflicted decisions, but it's a well planned, well executed story where everything is in deep relation to the grand plot, interlinking together as the story progresses, and finally when time is ripe, you will be amazed by the plot. Enjoy reading, and I'm sure you will be satisfied.

in less than 10 days the Mc went from being the weakest person in the village to being the strongest person in the region. the mc progression is to fast and his being given powerups after power ups with their being no real story.

This is an honest review! Grammer is bad basic spelling mistakes every where in every chapter author seriously needs a good spell checker program or a person to edit your stuff. Updates are stabilized so no complaints there. Story development has plot holes galor and feels like author changes his mind after saying one thing or it may just be because the wording is bad and i dont understand properly either way oh well. Character design is honestly pretty good i enjoy most characters but as for their way of thinking some of the one time onyk seeing guys or few time seeing guys just do stuff that dont add up but the main ones i like. World background is non existent just about it but he learns more as it goes on but i still feel there’s plenty missing that could be explained better.

Author san is here. I always loved Soul Land series, and I had this idea in mind for quite some time already. Finally I decided to write it down, hopefully y'all like and support it. I'm now writing many stories at the moment, many are contracted and going, so my time is tight. I'm writing this for fun, so I will give it a month of dedication, with daily update and so. If you supported it with enough stones to keep it in top ten in New ranking, then I will continue my daily writing and who knows, I might surprise you every now and then with Mass Release. :D:D:D:D:D

early chapters: mc gets a hot dragon girl and she goes to her ancestral home, all the more reason to defy the heavens. 200 chapters in: mc gets 2nd hot dragon girl.. and the first is irrelavent. early chapters: mc gets bear as pet and they have a nice cute friendship. 200 chapters in: bear hasnt been seen in ages. another pet hes gotten was sent to almost certain death bc it was weak. early chapters: mc has lots of advanced knowlege, but must adapt them to this world. makes it interesting. 200 chapters in: alchemy is no longer a problem bc magic couldron. ley lines are introduced and almost immediatly resolved. army formations are special, but future is looking bleak. early chapters:mc has a small bit reliable team that work together well. 200 chapters in: they all work as managers of his empire. pawns in his quest for power. tldr: give me one good reason to care about yet another power trip. ;-;

Reveal spoiler

If you're a fan for the cultivation trope of story, this is for you. The story follows the protagonist who was an acclaimed mastermind who found a way to defy the heavens, resulting in his demise. Just prior to his untimely demise, he managed to procure a solution and transmigrated into a different body but with an overall negative affinity to magic. From the first two chapters alone, we can easily see Arthur being a great mastermind and observe how he plans to overturn his current life as Willy. A truly inspiring and invigorating tale. **: Dear author, I find your prowess in the language to be superb! However, there are still room for improvements. It did not affect the story all too much but there are possible nit-pickers out there who would possibly choose not to read your story due to grammar. I also found the first chapter a little long winded as there were certain scenes that felt repetitive. However, this was a great idea. I love transmigration stories and cultivation stories always bring about excitement, especially in those action scenes!

read up to chapters 50, there were some flaws here and there but nothing major and story had a lot of potential except main character thinking which to me does not make sense. he is weak yet expands aggressively by sharing his secrets with any random passerby. this is not an exaggeration, 3 people (absolute strangers) saw him fight in a forest, so they just walked to him and boom he shared his secrets with them and even asked them to invite any of their friends... that's too much for given that he is sharing EVERYTHING and he is weak (it would make sense to create an organization of he could control it or at least have some pyramid setup where not any random joe gets the same goods as the leaders)