Hola Author of HMI here! I love how you write. You're descriptive and you know how to flow. It's rare to find that sometimes which is a good thing. But... Word of advice before you post check your spelling, I noticed a few errors there and trust I've been there where everything seems perfect but u missed something. Also don't be too descriptive leave somethings to the readers imagination
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