Okay, gotta say this was a rare fantasy novel ahead since the paradoxical manner on the way you write the title seems compelling to the fantasy readers out there! I would like to suggest one thing so the novel may click in for the readers to come. I suggest revising the synopsis with a more intriguing one, something that gives the reader a brief overview of the novel but not dumping information on it. One more thing, make a quote that has curiosity in it. That's all, please don't hate me about this. Keep it up!
Zuxian
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