Review Detail of Serial_seresposa in Cloven(Broken)

It's been a while since I read something original. You kept it simple and brought back the love of reading the typical books that made a girl excited and hopeful The only words of advice I have. Is if your gonna flashback and forth use your italics it helps give emphasis. Watch your spelling I noticed a lot of errors. Use Grammarly but also make sure to reread. Your transition is good. You've paced the book well. On some parts give a bit more detail other than that awesome