Review Detail of ProfesssorPedant in Harry Potter The Mutant Obscurus Gamer

I have only gotten to CH 28 so far, but will certainly continue. I am enjoying the story greatly. I like that he is rapidly growing in power, yet continuously meets with more powerful beings. The prose is good quality with standard grammar and interesting word choices. The balance of introspection/power building v. action/interpersonal interaction is skewed a little too much towards the former, in my opinion. But that may change and is not as much so as many gamer/cultivator fics I have read. The world building and magic system are interesting and deep. I am looking forward to Arc 3 where we will see him interact with Marvel supers (I anticipate). It will be curious to see where he falls on the power scale among them. I would like to see him build more personal connections. To see more of him as a person through interactions with other people. We have seen some. I want more. Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us.