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  • ProfesssorPedant
    ProfesssorPedant1yr
    Replied to CaptainBoyHole

    Pope is a Scottish surname meaning father. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pope_(disambiguation)#Surname

    Ch 1 Chapter One
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    New World Disorder
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  • ProfesssorPedant
    ProfesssorPedant1yr
    Posted

    The Superteam Young Blood from Chapter Three. Oddball, Hecate, Titan, Bombshell, Black Dragon, and N-Forcer I will try to include other illustrations inline.

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  • ProfesssorPedant
    ProfesssorPedant1yr
    Posted

    I have only been on the site a short time. I have little familiarity with cultivation as a story concept. Therefore I look to find stories that don't use it or other unfamiliar elements. This story fits my parameters pretty well. The wishes a the beginning rather than a more codified CYOA or other mechanism is more common on this site, but works well enough. The story is fun. Builds quickly, but fairly well so far. Also the prose is clean enough to not cause me issues reading it. I am enjoying the story and looking forward to reading more.

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    My Marvel Reincarnation.
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  • ProfesssorPedant
    ProfesssorPedant1yr
    Replied to ProfesssorPedant

    And I must compliment you on your English. I'm not sure if you're a native speaker or not, but I've found no issues that have damaged my enjoyment of the story.

    Ch 3 Kicking Ass & A Field-Trip
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    My Marvel Reincarnation.
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  • ProfesssorPedant
    ProfesssorPedant1yr
    Commented

    I am enjoying this much more than I expected. Well not deep, meaningful literature it is fun. Which is what I was hoping for. Looking forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing.

    Ch 3 Kicking Ass & A Field-Trip
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    My Marvel Reincarnation.
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  • ProfesssorPedant
    ProfesssorPedant1yr
    Replied to C13MO

    It did seem odd that GW managed to out draw a the skull to get off the crucio. I think the author underestimated the Skull in a physical situation.

    Ch 86 C86 New Leadership
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    I’m Voldemort (MCU Xover)
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  • ProfesssorPedant
    ProfesssorPedant1yr
    Commented

    Is his being a time anomaly enough to get her agree to his conditions. I don't know...

    Ch 27 C27 Kamar-Taj
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    I’m Voldemort (MCU Xover)
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  • ProfesssorPedant
    ProfesssorPedant1yr
    Commented

    I am not sure why, other than plot reasons, Tom is hesitant to declare himself Slytherin's heir. He did so in canon as a way to build reputation in the house. It would make things much easier for him. And speed up his missions.

    Ch 25 C25 Time Skip
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    I’m Voldemort (MCU Xover)
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  • ProfesssorPedant
    ProfesssorPedant1yr
    Commented

    Why do you call him Thomas? If his full name was Thomas Marvolo Riddle, his anagram would be different. It makes no sense that he would shorten his first name while using his full middle name. Or so it seems to me.

    Ch 16 C16 Wand
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    I’m Voldemort (MCU Xover)
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  • ProfesssorPedant
    ProfesssorPedant1yr
    Commented

    In terms of pairings, I strongly suggest that he dates several women, not necessarily at the same time. It is a rare person that only ever dates one person in their whole life or even during the whole secondary school career. Tom is said to be a handsome, charismatic boy. HE should date several girls through his time at school. Afterwards it depends on what happens to him. Just my thought.

    Ch 16 C16 Wand
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    I’m Voldemort (MCU Xover)
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  • ProfesssorPedant
    ProfesssorPedant1yr
    Commented

    I am still not sure what country this is taking place in. If WWII was mentioned in 1941 then it sounds like it is in the UK or other European country. Did the US have blackouts, curfews, and war pricing before 1942?

    Ch 5 Realisation
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    Marvel: Starting from the Bottom
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  • ProfesssorPedant
    ProfesssorPedant1yr
    Commented

    And here are the high school spider gang. Nice.

    Ch 57 Chapter 57 Girl Drama
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    Harry Potter The Mutant Obscurus Gamer
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  • ProfesssorPedant
    ProfesssorPedant1yr
    Commented

    It just occurred to me that in the Marvel comic of yore (back when I read them regularly) the premier university in NYC was Empire State University. That was were Peter Parker was a grad student, where Richards and Doom met, and Emma Frost attended. Richard "Nova" Rider, Felicity "Black Cat" Harding, and Doreen "Squirrel Girl" Green all were students.

    Ch 56 Chapter 56 Motivating the Students
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    Harry Potter The Mutant Obscurus Gamer
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  • ProfesssorPedant
    ProfesssorPedant1yr
    Commented

    You mention the "requirements" for doctorates, masters, professors, etc. several times. They do not match my experience as an academic in the US and other countries for 20+ years. I am curious if you are basing them off of the traditions in a specific country or if they are simply your current understanding or the way you think it should be? Still enjoying the story. Thanks for sharing.

    Ch 55 Chapter 55 The New Girl
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    Harry Potter The Mutant Obscurus Gamer
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  • ProfesssorPedant
    ProfesssorPedant1yr
    Commented

    It seemed a little odd to defeat Magneto off screen given his position as one of the top five/ten super villains/omega mutants. Nonetheless enjoying the story.

    Ch 51 Chapter 51 Preparations
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    Harry Potter The Mutant Obscurus Gamer
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  • ProfesssorPedant
    ProfesssorPedant1yr
    Replied to AcheronShadowcry

    Replying to yourself get XP?

    Ch 33 Chapter 33 Making Friends
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    Harry Potter The Mutant Obscurus Gamer
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  • ProfesssorPedant
    ProfesssorPedant1yr
    Commented

    A voluntary de-power to fit in with the supers. I would like to see how his current stats directly compare - ST = Beast? Colossus? Juggernaut? AGL = Daredevil? Nightcrawler? Spiderman? MartArts = Daredevil, Black Widow, Iron Fist? Psi = Psilock? White Queen? J Grey? Prof X? Energy Manipulation = Jubilee? Pyro? Cyclops? Magneto? All sorts of possibilities.

    Ch 28 Chapter 28 Wrapping up in Kamar-Taj
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    Harry Potter The Mutant Obscurus Gamer
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  • ProfesssorPedant
    ProfesssorPedant1yr
    Posted

    I have only gotten to CH 28 so far, but will certainly continue. I am enjoying the story greatly. I like that he is rapidly growing in power, yet continuously meets with more powerful beings. The prose is good quality with standard grammar and interesting word choices. The balance of introspection/power building v. action/interpersonal interaction is skewed a little too much towards the former, in my opinion. But that may change and is not as much so as many gamer/cultivator fics I have read. The world building and magic system are interesting and deep. I am looking forward to Arc 3 where we will see him interact with Marvel supers (I anticipate). It will be curious to see where he falls on the power scale among them. I would like to see him build more personal connections. To see more of him as a person through interactions with other people. We have seen some. I want more. Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us.

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  • ProfesssorPedant
    ProfesssorPedant1yr
    Commented

    OK...the flerkin got me. Nice touch.

    Ch 2 Chapter 2 Gearing Up
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    Harry Potter The Mutant Obscurus Gamer
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  • ProfesssorPedant
    ProfesssorPedant1yr
    Commented

    Enjoying the story. I like your take on politics. The Aaron/Tyrion relationship is the most interesting for me. Looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing.

    Ch 46 Ch. 15 Loyalty
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    The Great Lion
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