horrible romance, the protagonist has a system the player is still weak, he only beats enemies by luck, he looks like a stupid clown, his system the player is nerfed, the protagonist is just a cannon fodder.
GnomeBob
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LIKEU people want to argue, then argue.. but don't bring racism and ur narrow minded thoughts into any verbal war. First let me ask, by commenting something really mean would you be happy to know that someone that u hardly know is probably upset because of something you said.. be a positive influence on this world.. or just don't do anything at all.. but never be so mean to someone that they may lose their self confidence. I don't understand why u have to be so mean.. there is so much hate in this world, a little love and tolerance doesn't hurt anyone..
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who claimed your worm? do you look like a whore throwing a tantrum? criticisms are for that, it’s no use defending your gay male
Keyboard_Monkey:Lol. Didn't you complain this review was deleted?
Qvoth:who claimed your worm? do you look like a whore throwing a tantrum? criticisms are for that, it’s no use defending your gay male
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Hmm, I am not trying to defend him, however, I am pretty sure calling others virgin outright suggest to me that you yourself may be a virgin...
Qvoth:Fuck you
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Noice, though, I disagree with the calculation, he is more like a stick. Won't even keep the fire going.
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This review is bull-sh*t. Just to inform anyone who might want to read the novel. The story is lengthy, every chapter is quite long but I always brezze through them, which I can only do if I'm fully invested in the story (if the story is interesting) and if the grammar is good. The grammar in this novel is more than good, I saw a few spelling errors but those were mostly accidental typos. The Harry Potter part is quite short though, but the author has great knowledge about the Marvel universe and has very successfully weaved the magic system of Harry Potter and that of the Marvel universe. There is even a Dr Who cameo. The effort that was put into this novel has to be commended and should not be discredited by the likes of this guy... whose commenting history I have read and most of the comments are negative and insulting towards the works that he is reading... it's all complaints and bullshit... no constructive critisim what so ever. The story might not be liked by you...(who ever is reading this comment in the future) it might not be your cup of tea, but you have to agree that the effort put into it is praise worthy even though he is using ideas that already exist... I rly would like to see you, an average reader, come up with a story like this.