Review Detail of Fataki in Tales of the Legendary Magus

There's not that many bad things to say about the story just enough to make you stop bothering about it once you reach the last free chapter. The author force a lot of stuff to make the story develops how he want it. The Mc does not reflect the fact that he reincarnated he lives with kids and he is perfectly integrated with them, the author could just have chosen a kid from that world as mc it would have been better.