Interesting development. I like how Lucia keeps going back to the 'book'. I wonder if your other similarly titled story is somewhat related? Perhaps not. I'm about 1/3 in the story, but so far am not a big fan of the Duke. Lucia is and Irina are a cool duo, tho, so I've grown to like them. Having said that, there are some places where the narrative suddenly switches to 3rd person perspective in the middle of a scene. I got confused whether it was simple mistake or was she referring to Lucia from the book.
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