Review Detail of amaturewriter in The Mad Armada

- Chps are long as fk and well written. its all pretty nice. Some [ one so far ] character is OC but since its way way way before cannon, IDC. plus its dope. over 30 yrs before cannon, you've added characters like zepher and kong [ i am going to assume they'll appear more ], hope you explore world. add more new shit. Any characters, if its OC, its fine, just..try to maintain a personality trait reminiscent of the OG [ex: dont make grap a pervert? it'd clash with the character we are used to...didnt say u did this ]. Also I know its one piece and its anime but mihwak is too trusting and accepting of MC, its literally less than a day and he accepted and willing to follow MC and trusting him, its forced and rushed. build it or atleast say months passed. dosnt suit mihwak or anyone living in a world like OP world [OP whilst rushed each character relationship was build in arcs with major life events, like saving friends and their kingdoms, or each character of his crew individually. plus luffy had infinite charisma and was a protag] Any relationships just build, dont make MC or his lovers sluts that like him cause he OP or 'OMG what a knight ' or shit like that other than that, its all dope. GL [ if u can... tone done comedy? or the MC joking? unless its something u like and a 'plot' focus of the story, then you do you, just dont make it too common? ] .\. .