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2021-01-02 15:32

(Translated with Google Translate) In summary, this story is presented as a reincarnation fic, where the protagonist knows the plot and instead of taking advantage of his knowledge to survive in the world of Remanent, the protagonist adopts the name and appearance of Kirito, accompanied by the daughter of God. who sent him to the world of Remanent and who adopts the name and appearance of Alice follow the plot without modifying almost anything, the only thing that has changed is that sometimes the protagonists (Kirito and Alice) say the dialogues of other characters. I like the idea of ​​the story, but what I don't like is that it says that it is a system like SAO, but the system is unbalanced, the protagonist acquires many skills at the highest level as a reward, which renders their development useless or Kirito to get to work uploading them, another problem he presents is that the protagonist is a wimp in front of the girls, in addition to being somewhat silly in his interactions with them, which degrades him to being comic relief or being treated as a mascot by the girls.

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