Interesting very interesting i cant wait for more and the concept of a SAO system goes perfect with rwby since their being so many weapons and hunters with things like saiyans and other bullshi’t its nice to see a balanced and good godam’n system for once

Cant really say much i just read a couple of chapters i got really no good or bad to say about it ... more like annoying , i never understood this in these kind of stories... its basic human reaction to want to be good looking, strongest,fastest,smartest etc etc. no one is like" i want to be a fat guy with acne problems" so why is the mc picking a normal looking average guy as his looks ?"kirito" -_- he even stole his name that's so lame and he got a pretty wimpy attitude i don't mind a kind of or innocent attitude but that's not it he got a wimpy attitude , its written good got really no complaints just that i wrote above and that's more annoying then a complaint ?

I don't know a thing about rwby so I am a little lost so I am not against someone making a summarized anyway I like it . .. ..............

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they character development is this story major problem. there is hardly any character development in male MC parts and author also does not hint towards any future character development in male MC in his thoughts. other than this, author made male MC too stupid. I don't even have words to say anything about it. To me personally, this story feels like story of Alice and male MC other girls as the way author writes. Warning: anyone who hates simp or beta MC who are afraid of women and follow their orders like a dog, than this novel is not for you otherwise this novel could be considered good if author focus a bit more on above mentioned things. especially his way of writing as to me when I was reading it felt like he made female MCs the main protagonist and added male MC for cute moments of female MCs

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