Review Detail of NakedApron in Am I Inlove With My Bestfriend?

Hello, there are a lot of things going on in the story. The MC is 100% hype every sentence of the story, and the sentences are filled with emotions. Which I usually find interesting to read, but when it gets too much, it becomes a bit too hard to focus. Maybe slack up a bit on the hype and perhaps that will make the story easier to read? Though I love how the MC's name.