HI author! I think this story is based from your experience then, hmm. Anyway, I think you still have noticeable grammatical errors that caught my eye. i hope yu improve that and your updating pace is rather slow, I hope you constantly update. Overall the soty is nice the world background seems to be legit and yeah waiting for the plot to happen. Goodluck!
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