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Fallen_Dragon
Fallen_DragonLv153yr
2021-06-04 16:27

I gotta say the story is well handled once You get past the NTR(honestly hope there isnt more), but how the author makes use of it for character development for the MC’s future relationships is amazing P.s hope Lauren and Hanna get what they deserve and nothing better happen to his sister. And plz update more

Green Life

KrisVFX
4.5
253 Chs

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TheYeetedYeet
TheYeetedYeetLv15

I wouldnt call it NTR, more like one sided love. This love is involved with driving the plot and one of the antagonists in the story. It is more of a betrayal of friends and promises an emotional yet sayisfying revenge plot. 😁

3yr
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KrisVFX
KrisVFXAuthor

Author of "Green Life" here! I would appreciate if you could rate my work if you enjoy reading it!!😀😀😋 ------------------------------------------

4yr

ProfessorofCulture
ProfessorofCultureLv14

it's ok. it has a lot of flaws. The character development is too forced, I understand the author wanted to give the MC a tragic backstory but making everyone hate him for no reason at all just made it stupid and not realistic. Then all of a sudden he has a sister that came from nowhere. I don't understand why he's so obsessed with rei and Hana. Rei was just kind to him, Hana is his childhood friend was he expecting her to be with him just for that. author really need to develop the characters better

4yr
P_Ace
P_AceLv2

huh? well what do I say... It's good(?) ... :/ yup it's very good. Keep writing! (sigh. one-hundered and fourty! Come-on! reach it already! phew)

4yr
AmOnHolidays
AmOnHolidaysLv2

good novel , addictive story , has character buildup , not like where you just get everything going your way mc. Mc will be a bit annoying at first few chapters but it gets better eventually if you guys liked weak to strong with mc realising how power world works you will love it

4yr
Hikik0m0ri
Hikik0m0riLv3

I would say that I really like this novel, but I cannot do it for one reason, namely 18+ scenes, or, to be more precise, the lack of such in MC, it's just terribly uncomfortable for me to read the moments in which the MC observes other characters doing ***. Someone can say that MC is simply not interested in ***, but why then does the author poke these moments in our faces so clearly? The most unpleasant thing is that the author not only mentions the *** scenes, but partially details them, which makes these moments even more unreadable. And here you cannot use the excuse that this is only the beginning of the novel, since I am writing this comment at the time of the release of Chapter 75. Initially, I started reading this novel because of the harem and 18+ tags, but so far I have not seen any correspondence to these tags in this novel, except perhaps ntr. This novel has pretty good grammar and interesting character development, but I can't give 5 stars due to the above listed shortcomings.

4yr
Ero_Mood
Ero_MoodLv4

This dude watched all the anime and cultivation bullshit and copied all that. Trash mc for 24 chapters after getting all the power still wasting time in a underground city or something being an f rank hunter. Mc says he is not going to spare anyone he will be ruthless but don't kill any humans of course when he is not in af mood or some shit. Author made mc as pathetic as he could so people can feel sympathy or something for him but whole story is about how pathetic he is.

4yr
I_real_Lee
I_real_LeeLv1

As an author, I think the story has a high chance of becoming popular! To the author, I'd like to know why your updates take so long. If u keep on updating at a slow pace, readers might not be interested in reading your books!

4yr
khazar
khazarLv5

I will follow u to death... just don't drop please one of the best system novels I have ever read... I recommend this to everyone but those with weak hearts... there is an ntr tag for a reason.

4yr
iamalurker
iamalurkerLv2

Writing needs improvement especially in the grammar area but other than that this story is amazing on its own. The idea is very interesting and each chapter keeps you going. I hardly notice the mistakes because I enjoyed reading this. Hope you don't drop!

4yr
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