First off , i like the plot. Eldrich powered mc in an SI world, dope. but some stupid shit happens. Author, Mc has just SI'd into a different world with powers and the first thing he does is rob a bank? This is retarded. He just found out there are higher beings, made a deal with one, then got powers and was send to another world and the first thing he does is, banks robs? Why not collect info? Make plan? Come in to terms with what just happened. . Should've first learned about his powers, where he is, etc. People with money are smart, cunning and planners (villians becomes retards in presence of MC). Ur MC is an idiot that accepts anything as long as he is paid in cash. Its stupid. Also money is power, i agree. But, in a supernatural world, power is power. No amount money can save u from an OP dude. Asking for money in exchange for joining a group instead of knowledge, weapons, etc was retarded. Its even more retarded to join without knowing anything about em. I mean for all he knew, they could made him their slave Also using supernatural powers whilst knowing nothing about or the world u are in and using it infront of peope is stupid. For all you know, some other stronger person can come and make u lab rat or something. I like ur idea but u executed it badly and made mc a retard. (My thoughts on what i read so far, unless it changed )
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a useful review. -- I won't be reading.
not sure if u serious but IDK try it? take my review as a warning? u might like. IDC but take a review as just a warning
No, no I wouldn't be reading either way for other reasons, your review just adds another reason is all. （￣︶￣）↗