So, this review is based on a few first chapter. I'm gonna write another chapter if I've done read enough chapter (which unfortunately cost real money, but no matter) The plot is interesting, it's like "went isekaid" story but doubt began to emerge when I saw such as system, computer language thing and how the mc is the only one that capable to control it. It's like a game-based story rather generic isekai. Maybe this is because my first time, reading a system genre. Hopefully there will be an answer about the AI-thing that helped our mc in latest chapters. Then the grammar... well, actually I have no right to "complain" about it since my story also has a lot of grammar issue. But what I can say is that keep writing.
DragonKnov
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