This story has potential but what caught my eyes is the system. It's well made. I hope see more. The author can still maximize the hidden gem within this novel. I humbly suggest using grammarly and text-to-reader applications to improve flow style. I'm hoping for the best and I'll add this to my library since I love system. [img=recommend]
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