Review Detail of Sun23 in The Most Satisfied Reincarnate

The story is very similar to many other short novels and manga that I read so far. But as the story is still in progress I hope to see something unique that will differentiate this story from others. There were some tense issue and sentence that could be word better, but it's not going to be the end of the world if it's not fix. But what kind of bother me is the amount of bracket used, it's kind of distracting. But I understood this is something that the author needs. In overall, the story is not only compelling, but filled with an interesting setting.