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Small minor spelling issues to be corrected. With errors in the quotations marks errors aswell on some chapters. Just separate on some paragraphs away from the general dialogue. Nothing that really stops you from reading or following along. Anyway......... The authors detail of the items, clothes and surroundings is really detailed. Only plea i have is for the author to describe some of the main characters please...lol the environment there in gets some love. Even the wine & cognac's The flow of the story is really good as you go chapter to chapter and the mystery of the bet... spreads. I like how you've contextualized the real life parallels of social media and the spontaneous reactions it draws once something goes viral on the internet. Jo's personality is really funny to read... and her friends as well. Really enjoy this series, once the grammar issues are ironed out its perfect....

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Thank you for the suggestions. I will correct it.

Jo_J
Jo_JAuthorJo_J

BTW I love the gif ;)