webnovel
Tofu_eating_Cat
Tofu_eating_CatLv154yr
2020-11-27 21:41

The story is well written and has a nice start and concept but throws the concept away really fast. Spelling and grammar is not bad. There is a trigger moment in the story that could sirously turn people away, chapter 10 or 11. (Rape then death of an Ally, the first and only true Ally). At first the cruelty and focused mentality nicely depicted the animalistic side of the animal/MC. Kindness where kindness is due, but survival above all else. I wouldn't have minded continueing the story if the MC's moral and ethics stayed in this animalistic spectrum. (He asked AND answered himself that he WOULD abandoned his Ally again if he was at that moment in time again). The whole redemption after like 4~6 chapters later feels like a cop out after the author getting alot of hate I guess. The hate and anguish of the family member to the MC, after hearing about the Ally's death but not the rape, made sense. (I don't care how many sleeping visions you get, I'm not gonna forgive you ever. Fuck some shitty quote or items and shit.) Oh and the whole thing about having 9 lives doesn't matter anymore after like 15 chapters. Our MC is back to a normal webnovel Protagonist with 1 live. He starts acting like a normal person with only 1 life. Maybe later he'll get them back... somehow. But not having it already build in at the beginning, how he can get 'Cat lives' back, would feel too ham fisted to me. The world is ok, animals with wuxia skills and powers. Now the Young arrogant Nobel has an even clearer species advantage TO be arrogant. I had to drop it cause the story was getting a little wack for me. Both wanting to be an Animal Emo Edge Lord and sympathetic hero.

Liked by 14 people

LIKE
Replies2
VIS_puri
VIS_puriLv5

thanks for telling bro 👍

Jalysha_Zilverwilg
Jalysha_ZilverwilgLv15

I can live with an ally dying for development. But the way this happened was just not okay. It kinda made me feel like it was unsure if she would return or not (maby as an antagonist). But after a few comments/reviews/chapter names it doesn't feel like that. But the thing that was totally offputting was how Felix dealt with his regret like it is a pure sum of reasons/emotions. This isn't the case in real life so I had expected more to get past his regret. This story feels like an evolved animal into human society with only the worst human traits. This is probably not the case but I regret ever finding this novel. The normal animal kingdom isn't this cruel.

Other Reviews
dragons_fire
dragons_fireLv5
The_Procrastinator
The_ProcrastinatorLv12
Project0002
Project0002Lv4
HaracasAye
HaracasAyeLv4

Story: Mc is everyones errand boy, from very early in the story our mc is doing other ppl bidding even if its under the guise that he enjoys what hes doing. In fact hes an errand boy for the lion tribe for so long that he willingly decides to be their errand boy for the rest of his life. This stays true for the whole novel and even at the end hes literally forced into becoming the most powerfull being. Character: Mcs character is very bland, we are told hes someone that wants attention but doesnt get attached to people but its hardly ever actually shown. Other than what happened at chapter 10 whereafter the author jumped through multiple hoops to redeem mc because of backlash, there is nothing that shows off his selfish nature. World: Not really a very interesting world, theres a few continents and tribes across each one. Thats about it, no danger zones or interesting landmarks that the mc explores. We are told there are other planets with inhabitants but the mc is too busy defending this one to care. The god realm is just there, nothing too interestng in it either. Power System: Extremely boring after the first few chapters where we are introduced to it. Its essentially our mc gaining power by devouring and breathing techniques, but devouring is forgotten for the majority of the time and we are told mc uses his breathing techniques whenever he can. He gains godhood by eating the gods, no struggle to ascend or anything he just ate them and gained their power. Overall: A complete step down from authors first book, mc isnt likeable cause he doesnt know what he is, is he a selfish person who only cares about himself or someone who cares about his allies? Story is boring, him just doing others bidding the whole time, power system is extremely underdeveloped, side characters? who cares about them. To me after the backlash author got from ch 10, he decided to throw away the mcs personality and take something more safe and that ruined the whole story. For me personally what happened in ch 10 was suprising in a good way, i didnt expect anything like that to happen and it showed mcs selfish personality, if he would have stuck to his guns i think this story would have been much better.

Related Stories

Armipotent

This is a work of fiction, any names, characters, stories or events, are fictitious! (Even the country in the story is just the author's fantasy as the author never visited those countries in the story) Armipotent is an archaic adjective meaning "strong in battle." Basically, it refers to someone who is physically tough in war. Originally, it was used to refer to the Roman god of war, Mars. ===================== Tang Shaoyang, an orphan who dropped out of the middle school to fight on the street as he found out school was useless for a penniless orphan like him. Tang Shaoyang dropped out of his school, fighting on the street, and made a name for himself. Berserker Tang from Youyouliucun. Afterward, Dragon Wing triad recruited him and everything was good for him. Even though the public deemed him as a tumor of society, Tang Shaoyang was having a decent life. Until one day, everything changed as an absurd and strange game started. "... Game starts! Stage one: Survival for The Fittest!" After the game started, zombies appeared out of nowhere. ... Ding! "You have killed 1000 zombies less than 24 hours since the game started! You gained 3 Talents!" Dong! "You may choose 3 Talents! please choose carefully!" Tang Shaoyang held his chin and mused what Talent he had to choose. "With Zombies appear everywhere, I need an infinite strength... this is one, I still need to choose 2 Talents more..." Then a lewd smile formed on his lips. "I want an infinite strength, charm and charisma to conquer women, and the last one, I want to upgrade my **** so I can please my women!" After saying this, Tang Shaoyang laughed aloud. "Hahaha, there's no way such talent exists... ehhhhh?!!!" Ding! Dong! "3 Talents are consumed! You have been granted Divine Body! Good Luck, Gamer Tang Shaoyang!" Tang Shaoyang immediately checked the detail of Divine Body. After a brief silence, he muttered unbelievably. "Such Talents really exist..." Note: I don't own the cover. If the creator wants me to take down the cover or put credit, please notify me by replying to my review at the Review section.

HotIce · Fantasy
4.4
1847 Chs

Hero of Darkness

Elric's life had been nothing short of a nightmare since his childhood. He was constantly bullied at school, detested and ignored by his family, and left with nobody to care whether he lived or died. The accumulated loneliness and suffering from decades pushed him into a severe depression, and he ultimately decided to take his life’s final decision… Suicide. One day, Elric's soul heard a voice calling out to him. "Wake up, Elric. I am the God of Darkness, and I'm here to give you another chance at life." To the God of Darkness, Elric replied with only two words… "Fuck off!" Now forced with the possibility of a new life despite his unwillingness… Elric must decide whether to become a puppet or forge a new destiny with his own hands. Will he overcome his traumatic past, or will he squander yet another chance at life? Join the Protagonist on his journey as he is given an impossible task while striving to become one of the strongest beings in a world full of Magic, Mythical creatures, Dragons, and Gods. ---------------- [[Author : The protagonist of this story is a scheming mastermind who doesn't trust anyone and plans everything based on his present strength, knowledge and circumstances. No Romance, Harem, or Fan-service here. The main character is also not an Edgelord or a Psychopath who kills people without reason. Character development is a gradual process as the Main Character learns to acknowledge and overcome his flaws. This is a story for those who appreciate a psychologically well-developed character. The protagonist is an Antihero character who exists in the gray area between good and evil. This is a story for those who enjoy complex characters, greatly improving and expanding World-building along with intricate plots. If you are looking for a story with a nuanced and morally ambiguous yet humorous protagonist in a mature and gritty world, then this is the novel for you.]] ---------------- Note : Character Reference Arts available in chapter comments. Discord Link : https://discord.gg/xR7vUzCYx9 ---------------- Note : Vote for the Novel for extra weekly chapters. 500 Power Stones = 1 Extra Chapter per week 1000 Power Stones = 2 Extra Chapters per week 2500 Power Stones = 5 Extra chapters per week 500 Golden Tickets = 2 Extra chapters per week 1000 Golden Tickets = 3 Extra chapters per week 1500 Golden Tickets = 7 Extra chapters per week

CrimsonWolfAuthor · Fantasy
4.7
1135 Chs