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dragons_fireLv54yr
2020-09-26 00:15

Although it started out good, new, and interesting, in chapter ten he abandons a comrade to be Raped, and eaten. I don’t mind selfish MC’s all that much (ie not saving a damsel in distress, and basically NOT having a hero complex) but abandoning pretty much the only person you know is one of the lines I draw for reading. It’s nothing against you author, I’m just not into the more evil MCs. Peace out ✌️

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