Review Detail of Macharonni in Harem System: An Implosion on This Wonderful World

Honestly I quite enjoyed it during the beginning. However, when random children started popping up and also random lovers with no background started showing up, the story got very confusing. Especially during the Akame ga kill arc, which honestly could’ve been ended so much faster and simpler. I don’t know why the author decided to add so much unnecessary stuff like dream children, time travel, and all the side stories. In my opinion, you don’t even have to add anything, just erase some of the unnecessary content and the story would’ve progressed so much clearer. On the flip side, quality of writing was good and was clear to understand. Story is also very interesting and unique. Definitely a good sense of humor, although repetitive. I also think that the author had a good grasp on the originality of each character.