I didn't understand shit about this world since at first, there were three continents then another hidden one was added and now the guy was suddenly teleported to another continent after he escaped from the prison. Also the sacrifice of those two was pointless since for me, they were needed to build the kingdom because he just can't build it with villagers who don't have power. Also, Vincent was pretty chill before his death and made me feel a little but uncomfortable. I still didn't understand the world building so you better explain it author. the story has a good potential and the MC is a good protagonist which a good character development if you do it right but the grammar and the confusint world-building makes it hard for me to enjoy so better fix that
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LIKEWell, im going to make another novel and actually plan it, unlike this one as you can see the writing...
commander_pride_21:what?!! why?
FishyFish:Well, im going to make another novel and actually plan it, unlike this one as you can see the writing...
commander_pride_21:Well, I hope you give us a better one. can't wait for a better novel