For those who new... This novel is abandoned, it's because there are many problem that I can't fix, so Im trying to make up for it in the new novel I'm sorry. and Thank you for reading!

Working on it! :)

Thank youu, I'll try to fix it in my next novel!

Thank you, I'll try my best on my next one :)

Thank you, I will try my best :)

Thank you

Well, im going to make another novel and actually plan it, unlike this one as you can see the writing...

well, I abandoned this novel just today.

Thank you for the kind words :)

After some thinking I will abandon this novel, thank you for your comment. It can help me to fix the things in my next novel.

First of all, thank you, for the constructive feedback. And you are absolutely right. Nothing is wrong with it. honestly, I didn't plan too much when making this novel, I'm sorry if it was a bad experience for you. I realize it too late, but I can't redo them all, since well, there is restrictions. as for the black sands honestly, It was stupid of me and I changed it using magic. I truly appreciate your comment, With this, I knew I missed a lot of things, and many of your comment makes me realize many of my mistakes. Thank you for reading this novel of mine. Hope you have a nice day :)

thank you for reminding me! Ill fix it right away :)

thank youu!

Sorry, i will fix it, but after I research more... The chap won't change too much, only the explosive part. Thank you for telling me, and thank you for reading :D

Of course

Thank youu

Thank you for the gifts!!

thank youuuu

I'll try my best thank youu

See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire