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DaoistoxlZzT
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2021-01-11 18:36

An interesting premise and decent idea. HOWEVER : 1)The novel is very blatant in its "propaganda" for a certain country with the standard "this country is the only one with actual intelligence and civility, The rest are barbarians that want to join us." 2) This is a harem, The difference from the standard harem being that there is no romance. In other words the worst parts of harem only. MC is the only male even mentioned for the majority of the story. 3) Issues constantly regarding any mention of price as the translator couldn't copy-paste the symbol properly. 4) Very point to point. Curious if a certain character will be ongoing/reoccuring? Is she an attractive woman? If so then yes. Is the woman, who just turned up immediately after an info dump regarding a "mysterious" topic, related to said topic? Yes directly. Overall : I despise harem but this novel could still be barrable if it weren't for the constant "meta commentary" and "Pro-(a certain country)" propaganda, It isn't even well masked. This novel is around 70% pro-certain country propaganda and using false history to make it sound glorious, 10% describing women, 10% info dumping, 5% MC prattling about playing LoL and 5% of actual interesting story. Would not recommend unless you are utterly desperate.

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Syphilitis
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Thanks for the words of wisdom

DarkD
DarkDLv14

I'm shocked this review wasn't deleted by either the author or webnovel itself given that it's a year old. Consider me shocked. Now I'm worried this was intentionally left alone to make the story look like it doesn't delete reviews... Gotta do more research.

DaoistoxlZzT
DaoistoxlZzTLv1

If I'm not mistaken, I believe they only delete reviews when the account holder isn't active on the site, as I read alot on here I am fairly active. I could be completely mistaken though.

DarkD:I'm shocked this review wasn't deleted by either the author or webnovel itself given that it's a year old. Consider me shocked. Now I'm worried this was intentionally left alone to make the story look like it doesn't delete reviews... Gotta do more research.
Joseph_Greathead
Joseph_GreatheadLv14

if you want a similar read, read I'm not really the demon lords lackey. very good and so far no harem but there are misunderstandings about relationships. and the mc is op but he doesnt even know so he doesn't try to do much the only times we know hes op is spoiler: (sorry i dont know how to do the bar ive seen it before just can't) in the "dream realm) he believes iits dream so he just lucid dreams but i guess the closest reference without actually saying it is azathoth if our reality is just his dream then imagine what could be donyby a seemingly ordinary person

DaoistoxlZzT
DaoistoxlZzTLv1

Late reply, but I’ve actually already read that one, it also has a Manhua adaptation as well!

Joseph_Greathead:if you want a similar read, read I'm not really the demon lords lackey. very good and so far no harem but there are misunderstandings about relationships. and the mc is op but he doesnt even know so he doesn't try to do much the only times we know hes op is spoiler: (sorry i dont know how to do the bar ive seen it before just can't) in the "dream realm) he believes iits dream so he just lucid dreams but i guess the closest reference without actually saying it is azathoth if our reality is just his dream then imagine what could be donyby a seemingly ordinary person
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