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GummyOfDoom
GummyOfDoomLv54yr
2020-10-30 07:17

Both book by the authors has a good premise, but have been so poorly executed you want to puke. It really is a shame for a good idea. MC is retarded, but the world is much more retarded to highlight his amazingness. Early is not so bad. As you usually cant expect much deep plot in webnovel. But in ch. 30 ish. He log into the game which require him to be unconscious in a possible enemy's car. For no fking urgency whatsoever. He went that far just to show how retarded he is to the reader. dropped. Translator did a good work though. But its better to pick another title.

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14st16hn
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I very much agree. I feel like we have the same type of taste in novels. Why don’t you try Notebook of Fortune by Heng Sao Tian Ya and I Am A Legendary Boss by I Am Immortal. I hope u like it

InfiniteZer0
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Big part that made me dislike the novel was just how bad the IRL portion of it was. The game section was okay, but every part of the IRL was just bad

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