Review Detail of qisbooboo in What Do You Do When You Suddenly Become An Immortal?

Overall a decent read, chapters are a bit short but it works. The characters are pretty nice. Of course they are a bit stereotypical but stereotypes work for a reason and it's not stereotypical in the cringey way yaknow. Some stereotypes are done poorly (cause they're all like wow I'm so woke let me not be this stereotype or let me use this stereotype, like that fake awareness you see) but this novel does it pretty decent. it doesn't feel awkward. slightly humorous in certain areas. Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler My perhaps beef with this story is that already you see the beginning of a "modern martial arts world" His landlord might be some sort of martial artist, the criminal apprehended was also a martial artist. And supposedly spirit qi doesn't exist on Earth, but you got external physical cultivators who cultivate internal qi i guess. And then there's a physique cultivation and stronger than a normal man etc. But despite this , the world building is still okay. But I have a feeling it's going to go all in on the typical martial arts modern world (but hidden) thing. S only 3/5 for world building