Ill be quick. Everything is great. world/character/story/writing, all good to great. HOWEVER!!! The MC ends up making firearms in a otherwise perfectly normal cultivation novel. Which ruined it for me. If your ok with firearms you'll enjoy this novel. If not, you probably wont. Here is a direct quote from around chapter 240. ' I looked at the incoming cultivators and pulled the minigun I had left from my side bag. While at the same time manifested the four puppet arms from my shoulders and belt. The arms around my belt had a twelve-round rocket launcher each, while the ones on my shoulder had their own miniguns.'
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I mean, firearms arn't really his main weapons they're just something he made when he was bored. But its your right to drop the story, i'm at least pleased that your read this far, thank you for your read and time.
Just wanted to say, I think your an amazing author. Lots of talent shown in this novel and interesting ideas. Im personally am not into firearms and thats all it is. The way you introduced them and how they are used makes sense and i dont think clashes with the lore. I usually read cultivation novels to escape modern day and firearms drags me out. Will definitely keep an eye out for other work you do though.
Biako:I mean, firearms arn't really his main weapons they're just something he made when he was bored. But its your right to drop the story, i'm at least pleased that your read this far, thank you for your read and time.
is he a ''good guy'' or a ''villain'' or a disgusting anit-hero?
Biako:I mean, firearms arn't really his main weapons they're just something he made when he was bored. But its your right to drop the story, i'm at least pleased that your read this far, thank you for your read and time.
Is this harem?
Biako:I mean, firearms arn't really his main weapons they're just something he made when he was bored. But its your right to drop the story, i'm at least pleased that your read this far, thank you for your read and time.
