Review Detail of tuba_san in Rebirth of the Dragon immortal

I'll be honest with you (both readers and the author) this novel is not good at all. I saw the author promote it in the forum tread and since it's their first book, I came to give it a try but it was a complete let down. The problems in it, can all be fixed if the effort is made, all I hope is for the author to try and make that effort. First issue: writing and grammar. It's bad. The general writing lacks punctuation and proper capitalized words. Sentences are all over the place. The tenses aren't correct, sometimes even the words aren't correct. Overall could use a lot of work. There is no continuity, one moment it's a backstory, the next someone just finished (?) trying to cultivate. The writing is just abrupt. Chapters are too short. If you want to write a novel, write at least 700 words per chapter. The POV changes are completely random. One moment we're looking from one person's perspective, the next it's someone else. The story is just rushing to get somewhere, not sure where though. There is no world building or even explanation for where the MC is. Things are just happening, no sense or reason to them. I tried to give my input the best that I could. Hope the author works hard to improve in all these aspects.