Review Detail of Fjinko in Moral System of Harem King!

Sup, i promised to write a review to your novel as soon as i am up to date. I decided to give you some pointers on what I think you are good and Bad at so you may increase the general quality of your novel. Take it with a grain of salt, since I am no expert myself and these are just some of my obversations. And also let my say I enjoyed your Novel so far and I wouldn't bother to write this review if i didn't. Good: - The writing quality is mostly good. Here and there I rarely see some wrong pronouns, but thats it. - The Story is interesting so far, but i can't really say much more to it since we are still at the beginning. I like the heroes' journey model and if you keep it that way i will continue to like it. - The Worldbuilding is also interesting. There isn't much to it yet, since we gradually progress with our understanding of the world with the understanding the MC has. But there are lot of uncertainties with potential. - Man of culture Bad: - The Wifes lack individuality. It's cool that there is art and also the different races and such, but I know more about the personalities of some sidecharacters then i know about the wifes. - Hardships that the character has to overcome is often essential to make it interesting. Your story is a little bit fast pasted and you are missing some opportunities to make it more interesting and give the characters more depth because of that.