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GreedAF
GreedAFLv43yrGreedAF

this book has potential, the direction it goes us good, progression speed is good too, really good grammar, but character development is not shown much, the info about the world and its power system isn't really clear, and i personally don't like how he goes for one night stands, it just doesn't feel right

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Moral System of Harem King!

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TheLustGod
TheLustGodAuthorTheLustGod

Thank you for reviewing the novel. The character is developing with each event and each chapter and you will know him with as the story progress, same with the world development and Power system. Because I didn't want to bore you with infodump, I wanted to give the information essential to story piece by piece. I am certain in 20 chapters, it will fall into place. Thank you and please keep supporting me!

GreedAF
GreedAFLv4GreedAF

thanks for your hard work, but what about his one night stand trend???

TheLustGod:Thank you for reviewing the novel. The character is developing with each event and each chapter and you will know him with as the story progress, same with the world development and Power system. Because I didn't want to bore you with infodump, I wanted to give the information essential to story piece by piece. I am certain in 20 chapters, it will fall into place. Thank you and please keep supporting me!
TheLustGod
TheLustGodAuthorTheLustGod

It is still to early, and harem only has 2.5 girls. It will change soon when he creates a solid stronghold where he can have his harem.

GreedAF:thanks for your hard work, but what about his one night stand trend???
LohQiwan
LohQiwanLv2LohQiwan

Can you give me a rough estimate of how much mc's harem will include?

TheLustGod:It is still to early, and harem only has 2.5 girls. It will change soon when he creates a solid stronghold where he can have his harem.
TheLustGod
TheLustGodAuthorTheLustGod

Few and far between. One from that race, maybe one from that one. But not a giant one.

LohQiwan:Can you give me a rough estimate of how much mc's harem will include?
LohQiwan
LohQiwanLv2LohQiwan

Oh kkk.......

TheLustGod:Few and far between. One from that race, maybe one from that one. But not a giant one.
LohQiwan
LohQiwanLv2LohQiwan

I just hope that it exceeds 10 at the minimum since the story revolves around harem, I have seen countless novels that have over 15 harem (at minimum) but still enjoyed it, they all don't have to be main harems, there can be concubines, mistresses, slaves, maids etc all can be in 1 harem

TheLustGod:Few and far between. One from that race, maybe one from that one. But not a giant one.
TheLustGod
TheLustGodAuthorTheLustGod

Except slaves, the rest will be in the harem. Story has just started and will expand to two other places in the future, there will be no lack of women.

LohQiwan:I just hope that it exceeds 10 at the minimum since the story revolves around harem, I have seen countless novels that have over 15 harem (at minimum) but still enjoyed it, they all don't have to be main harems, there can be concubines, mistresses, slaves, maids etc all can be in 1 harem