ummm sure? I have no clue how it's gotten bad besides a random thing or two like the multiverse being which I just had there because it makes sense there is unlimited universes plus it will connect some of my other stories rick and morty are hinted at canonically sharing the same multiverse as gravity falls and I've got no clue how my story is bad now

And besides grammar mistakes there really isnt any and it's a fanfic so don't expect me to go through and fix almost every grammar if you've been with me throughout my writing career you would know how hectic my life is so yeah I don't have time to go through and correct everything and if the edited chapters are your problem aswell grammarly fault ran it through there I personally fixed a decent portion if mistakes aswell

and tell me the confusing things I have context clues and things that aren't obvious because I don't outright say it, and just ask me I've linked my discord server a few times if you don't understand something ask me and then I can explain it lol

but seriously thanks for the feed back, now I just need you to specify the things that brought you to the conclusion and work with me to improve the story because as of now I don't see very many problems so you will have to explain yourself is that ok?

There’s a lot of mistakes, especially for someone who has over 70 chapters. It does say (edited), however you didn’t really do much.

Umm sure ig, if grammar is your issue like I said I tried and how do you know if I did much, did you read these when they first came out they were pretty bad grammar wise, but still that's it you told me you had all these problems but you point out the one thing already know, seriously you mention all these criticisms yet give me the one I hear all the time and working on, if that's all i don't know why you are making such a fuss, and yes I did go through them I don't even see the mistakes most of the time, and of course I'm not going to be as meticulous as you want me to be, you do realize I try to update daily if I took a few hours to do that each day well there would be no update because of how hectic things are anyways, I hope you give me actual reasons I do like improving my story, but I already warned you about the whole grammar thing

And secondly how do you know I didn't try, how do you know if I didn't put alot of effort into editing.

It’s pretty obvious tbh. It would be understandable if English wasn’t your first language but if it is, then you need to work on your grammar, basically your writing skills. And that’s coming from someone who had only just begun writing 3 months ago with no prior experience.

uh huh, and it is your rather rude and completely wrong do you realize how fast I write these, these take about an hour or two, i type on phone and I use no assistance currently what so ever, your on my case for grammar read half the stories on here you know what, you've mentioned only my grammar you've given me no reasons besides that on why my stories not that good, I said reasons besides my grammar

You have gave me no useful criticism all you have given me was insults, and assumptions you have lost all of your credibility in my eyes I had warned you I already know of my grammar problem but seemingly your to stupid ti comprehend that and wanted to give me useless criticisms

Dude, im not trying to be disrespectful. I could provide more criticism but to be honest i don’t want to read more. Anyways, just accept the review and move along. I could tell that you have been deleting reviews btw.

Can't even understand half of what you said tbh.

Ok hear me out. Maybe just maybe you have a problem with reading the English language