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Please punctuate speaking hard to follow conversations. Needs better proof reading or an editor. I other wise am enjoying the story thus far.

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S3arching

Liked it!

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yes it a rough draft . I still need to go back in and clench it up and edit it . when I get the time I'm going to go back in . I will update chapter by chapter . I haven't even read it through yet so I know there is so much that needs to be fixed and will have to add on to parts .

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