Review Detail of Blaz3r in Jack of Arts

First of all it started very good but as the story went on it started to get quite unrealistic and annoying, The MC is much more talented the other people yet he add a group of young people to his band? and all of them agree? they all move together? The MC adding them together was a mistake. In my opinion the story could've been the story would've been much more enjoyable if that didn't happen.