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KENTARO12100
KENTARO12100Author3yr
2021-06-18 17:37

Hello, how are you guys, I am the author leaving a message that you should read before starting the reading of the novel. I was able to read a lot of comments and reviews in which it is mentioned that the story progresses slowly. I want you to know that the first part of the story comprises from episodes 1 to 205. It is the basis of the novel because it was the moment where the characters and the world around them were developed. This was done intentionally because in the next volumes of the novel the story will develop with more speed. I hope you can understand this before you start reading the novel, but if you wonder after episode 205 the time span between episode and episode will only increase. Of course, there will be no radical time jumps that can cause plot holes or discomfort on your part. As for the secondary story that is told, it is very important because it is the course of the world that is changing just by changing some things. From the civil war in the Frankish Empire to changes in the Byzantine Empire, all history will change.

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KENTARO12100
KENTARO12100Author

Sure, tell me your doubts

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KENTARO12100
KENTARO12100Author

Sure, tell me your doubts

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Anajao
AnajaoLv2

is there gonna be hearm. please say no.

KENTARO12100
KENTARO12100Author

*Pss Einar the guys want you to have other wive* Einar:

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RebelKid
RebelKidLv14

Is the mc op ?

KENTARO12100
KENTARO12100Author

No it's human, have knowledge of martial arts and other stuff, he can bleed even in one chapter was so close of dead

RebelKid:Is the mc op ?
RebelKid
RebelKidLv14

ohh i see. Tnxs for the quick reply.

KENTARO12100:No it's human, have knowledge of martial arts and other stuff, he can bleed even in one chapter was so close of dead
KENTARO12100
KENTARO12100Author

Don't worry I read all your comments, as a author always listen your opinions, if you start reading the novel and like leave a review. always it's good to see your opinions

RebelKid:ohh i see. Tnxs for the quick reply.
I_love_magic
I_love_magicLv10

Bro, a question.... will Christianity be portrayed as evil and the enemy? I'm asking this because too many stories like this fall into that trope and it got on my nerves a few times beforehand. Thanks for the answer in advance!

KENTARO12100:Sure, tell me your doubts
KENTARO12100
KENTARO12100Author

in the begging yes, but will be a problem with the church, Einar will make a reform to create new church same faith. Maybe will cause some for readers, but it's attack to church and there sins no to the faith. remember that because it's no the same the church that faith, I never will write something versus the faith. but church it's different, anyway read carefully my answer and if you read the novel take calm when read the parts against the church

I_love_magic:Bro, a question.... will Christianity be portrayed as evil and the enemy? I'm asking this because too many stories like this fall into that trope and it got on my nerves a few times beforehand. Thanks for the answer in advance!
I_love_magic
I_love_magicLv10

Thanks for the answer! ;)

KENTARO12100:in the begging yes, but will be a problem with the church, Einar will make a reform to create new church same faith. Maybe will cause some for readers, but it's attack to church and there sins no to the faith. remember that because it's no the same the church that faith, I never will write something versus the faith. but church it's different, anyway read carefully my answer and if you read the novel take calm when read the parts against the church
MountBook
MountBookLv4

what does unprincipled tag means(first time seeing it)?

KENTARO12100
KENTARO12100Author

(of a person or their behavior) not acting in accordance with moral principles.

MountBook:what does unprincipled tag means(first time seeing it)?
ihavesmallPP
ihavesmallPPLv2

author is this harem story(I mean will he really relationship with more than one women).

KENTARO12100
KENTARO12100Author

It's no Harem but have only 3 wives, and every wive has their background history and personality, the MC take time in the relationship he made.

ihavesmallPP:author is this harem story(I mean will he really relationship with more than one women).
ihavesmallPP
ihavesmallPPLv2

So he has three wives, so it is harem.

KENTARO12100:It's no Harem but have only 3 wives, and every wive has their background history and personality, the MC take time in the relationship he made.
KENTARO12100
KENTARO12100Author

I don't consider Harem, because the MC don't get every woman he find, he is human so can't satisfied allot of woman's. Anyway give a try if you want, maybe you will like

ihavesmallPP:So he has three wives, so it is harem.
EzeSo
EzeSoLv5

thanks! please write it more 😁

Ian_Rafael_5598
Ian_Rafael_5598Lv1

when will you be back?

KENTARO12100:I don't consider Harem, because the MC don't get every woman he find, he is human so can't satisfied allot of woman's. Anyway give a try if you want, maybe you will like
KENTARO12100
KENTARO12100Author

If things goes well this month or next but be sure I will back.

Ian_Rafael_5598:when will you be back?
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Hua_Li_An
Hua_Li_AnLv3

"The Sage of Einar" is an exciting story similar to Diana Gabaldon's "Outlander", with a touch of Nordic and Viking history. Personally, I'm a sucker for stories with vikings in them. I could count the number of Eric, son of Eric's I have read about in dozens of novels. So, this one definitely caught my eyes. Alas, because I hold so much expectations for this, I too will give an appropriate review. Points to work on: -Grammar: It's definitely better than most of the webnovels I've read, but I know you can do better with your proofreading. Make it more readable, and I might just be an avid fan. -Dialogue: Now this is a tough issue. Frankly, the characters don't seem real, especially when you read through their dialogues. I may not be privy to it, but is there a modern country where a father calls his daughter, "Daughter"? This is one of the biggest issues I've seen, and it's important to improve on this because having a culture-rich story like this requires believable character interactions. If the conversations are as dry and constructed as the ones I have seen, then more should really be done about it. Points I really liked: -Story: The plot is fast-paced and interesting. I would have been easily sucked into it if there were less problems with the grammar and dialogue. -Feelings: I loved how their interactions were human-like (sadly, their dialogue was weirdly off...). Max was crazy scared when he was looking for his daughter. The daughter was hinted to be jealous about his father treating Ana well (and not her deceased mother!). It's cute, and these little things matter to me as a reader. -Representation: Greece, Japanese, Nordic, American(?). I loved the slight references to many nations and cultures. Andddd that's about it! I might have been carried away too much, but there's my honest review. This novel holds great promise, and appeals to a certain target market (me), but sadly still suffers from general writing. Author, improve more on the technicalities, and I might turn out to be a fan. :D

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