Review Detail of TheRabbitHole in You're The First And The Last

If you're looking for a teen rom-com, this is it, and it has an interesting twist to it. The start was a bit sluggish to me due to the writing but I was glad to see the writing improved drastically by the newer chapters (it'd be nice for the older chapters to be updated, especially for new readers, but at the same time, it would be a welcome surprise to see the improvement as the chapters progressed). That being said, there is still more room for new improvements. I like the story and I hope it succeeds one day and becomes a comic. o(￣▽￣)ｄ