I like friendship stories, but this work is at the next level! I like how the author draws the background world so neatly and i like the Japanese culture in the very beginning chapters. The action and the thrill make it even more challenging to read! just some input from me.. i think the author may watch the punctuation and the space between one to another person dialogue so it would be neater. But for the rest of that is good! Nice story to read!

A good read. The story itself has potential to be something trully amazing, the plot seems promising through out the chapters and the character's are life like which is good at the reader's interpretation. Overall i liked the story.

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